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I Did Just As You Had Asked Me To

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Published: Mar 24, 2014

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Literature Text

I drank your sun
to light my grey moon

fiery in my throat
melting organ by organ
it flowed through

I felt it seep through my soul
and scorch through my skin
casting shadows of you

I lie dead on the floor now
a mass of soft flesh
drowned in a blood pool

So yeah, I tried out fonting.... ( I know thats not a word

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Its more than a good start. The imagery of the acidic sun melting the skin casting shadows of you is outstanding. It is repeative I'll admit and the ending suck (sorry) but the one piece is awesome.